Establishing shot
Camera pans from left to right of oxford from the top of st.marys tower, cuts to close up of detectives face at line "No way", detective is standing in darkened alley smoking a cigarette. narration continues throughout establishing shot.
Detective: (Narrating) It all started 6 years ago. It was my first case in the new department. Homicide. looking back on it, the promotion probably went to my head. I wanted to prove my worth to the force. I ended up in a bed for 3 months, eating food through a god-damned straw. They used to call this the city of dreaming spires... But no ones dreaming anymore. he gave me the slip once, and shit, he thought he'd gotten away with it. No way, (toking a cigarette, dirty cough) not this time. (leans into the light for the first time) This time your mine boy. (chucks cigarette on floor and stamps out)
Detective: I'll pretend i didn't hear that... (Through gritted teeth)
Villain: Thats the least of your worries Sergeant. (Pause) Did you know, theres a great deal to learn working at a power plant. Practical things(grabs jimmy's face) Have you ever heard of plutonium? Lovely substance, fascinating properties. We used it on the japs back in 45. Did the job. Very efficient. Now IM gonna use it on you.
Jimmy starts struggling and his body and face gets obscured by the villain pouring the vial into his mouth. all you can see of jimmy is his legs struggling frantically.
Villain drops to floor, dead. Detective slumps against alley wall next to garbage can and pulls out a cigarette. Same narration from the beginning starts "They used to call this the city of dreaming spires... Coz this city's so god-damn fucked, they cant bear to ever wake up."
Final shot: Detective dies and hand falls to floor, cigarette rolls out of fingers and camera steadily zooms out using a crane shot.
Camera pans from left to right of oxford from the top of st.marys tower, cuts to close up of detectives face at line "No way", detective is standing in darkened alley smoking a cigarette. narration continues throughout establishing shot.
Detective: (Narrating) It all started 6 years ago. It was my first case in the new department. Homicide. looking back on it, the promotion probably went to my head. I wanted to prove my worth to the force. I ended up in a bed for 3 months, eating food through a god-damned straw. They used to call this the city of dreaming spires... But no ones dreaming anymore. he gave me the slip once, and shit, he thought he'd gotten away with it. No way, (toking a cigarette, dirty cough) not this time. (leans into the light for the first time) This time your mine boy. (chucks cigarette on floor and stamps out)
Approximately: 45 secs
Interrogation
Detective: You're a difficult man to find John. Do you know why we're after you? (Casual/Relaxed)
Villain: There's always a reason with you people. (Calm/Casual)
Detective: Do you know why IM after you? (Intrusive/Interrogative)
Villain: Oh? Didn't recognise you there detective, Hows Jimmy doing? (Said with a smile/Smug/insulting)
(Flashback of Jimmy looking practically dead, detective sat by the bed with head in hands. Nurse: "the poisons gotten into his blood stream detective, we've never seen anything like this before... im sorry" detective gets up and punches the wall. obscured effect)
Detective: Listen, we can either do this the easy way or we can do this the hard way, its your call John... (long pause)
Villain: (Runs away)
Detective: Hard way it is.
Approximately: 30-40 secs
Flashback
Jimmy is tied to a chair in a dark room with only one bulb, the camera uses a dutch angle shot to capture the villain entering the room.
Jimmy: do you know how much shit your gonna be in for messing with a cop?
Jimmy starts struggling and his body and face gets obscured by the villain pouring the vial into his mouth. all you can see of jimmy is his legs struggling frantically.
Approximately: 20-30 secs
*CHASE SCENE* Include - match-on-action
At the end of the chase scene the villain runs into dead end, detective catches up with gun pointed at villains head.
Approximately: 1:30
Confrontation
Detective: Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide. Time to face the music, (name).
Villain: Times a fickle thing detective, im afraid your last song has already begun.
Detective: Cut the crap and beg like the dog you are.
Villain: For a detective, your not the sharpest of men are you?
Detective realises that during the chase scene brawl hed been stabbed with a toxin (flashback)
Villain: Ive got the cure right here in my pocket, you can still leave here with your life.
Detective: Or i could just kill you right here. Right now.
Villain: The stakes are high detective, sure you want to take the risk?
Detective: Ive always been a gambling man...
Villain: Well ive always been lucky......BANG
Approximately: 1-1.20 min
Final shot: Detective dies and hand falls to floor, cigarette rolls out of fingers and camera steadily zooms out using a crane shot.
Approximately: 15 secs
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